國(guó)內(nèi)的大多數(shù)英文文章都摻雜了很多高級(jí)的詞匯、大量的短語(yǔ)詞組和復(fù)雜的句式句型，有時(shí)候糅合太多，反而會(huì)顯得文章冗贅啰嗦，甚是尷尬。學(xué)會(huì)適當(dāng)減持你的語(yǔ)言，好的文章應(yīng)該是簡(jiǎn)潔凝練的。Never use ten words where five will do.

如何使英語(yǔ)論文語(yǔ)句更簡(jiǎn)練呢？

一、簡(jiǎn)化句子結(jié)構(gòu)，增強(qiáng)活力和表現(xiàn)力

(1)?以it，here, or there be開(kāi)頭且指引的是句中的名詞，同時(shí)句子里常常跟上to be/ to do的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，比如it is, it was, here is, there is, therewill be……這些結(jié)構(gòu)往往不再?gòu)?qiáng)調(diào)句中實(shí)際的驅(qū)動(dòng)者成分，把true driver的意義稀釋了，而且這種結(jié)構(gòu)通常需要其他關(guān)系詞來(lái)支撐和聯(lián)接，如who, that and when，進(jìn)一步dilute你的文章。比如：

? Wordy：It's fun to editing.

? Concise：Editing is fun.

?Wordy：Here are some things to consider：

?Concise：Some things to consider are:

(2)?把伴隨動(dòng)作狀語(yǔ)改成副詞，比如：

?Wordy：Sympathizing with her concerns, he nodded in response to her complaint.

?Concise：He nodded sympathetically in response to her complaint.

(3)?適當(dāng)?shù)匕押笾枚ㄕZ(yǔ)從句改成前置形容詞，比如：

?Wordy：Do not try to anticipate those events that will completely revolutionize society.

?Concise：Do not try to anticipate revolutionary events.

(4)?介詞短語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)，比如：

?Wordy: Make sure you approach the conversation in a careful way.

?Concise: Make sure you approach the conversation carefully.

(5)“which is” 、 “who were”等有時(shí)可以刪除但保留原義且無(wú)傷語(yǔ)法，比如：

?Wordy：We drove down Lombard Street, which is considered the crookedest street in the world.

?Concise：We drove down Lombard Street,considered the crookedest street in the world.

二、可以用動(dòng)詞來(lái)描述的時(shí)候就盡量避開(kāi)弱化語(yǔ)氣的名詞化表達(dá)

比如當(dāng)你看到“verb+ a/an noun” 的組合結(jié)構(gòu),直接用實(shí)義動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替該短語(yǔ)，簡(jiǎn)化句子的同時(shí)增強(qiáng)句子活力。比如：

?Wordy：The report gave an analysis of the accident.

?Concise：The report analyzed the accident.

?Wordy：Alcohol is the cause of hangovers.

?Concise：Alcohol causes hangovers.

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